Link368 Hylian Knight
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| Subject: TLoZ: Flames of Fury Wed Dec 23, 2009 3:49 pm | |
| Note: As I said before, this is HF's official fan-fic. Enjoy! (I think it's better than my other "failed" fan-fics.
The Legend of Zelda: FLAMES OF FURY
Chapter One: The Nightmare
"Ganon is coming back... Ganon is coming back..." The strange voice filled his head as he slept. Suddenly, he awoke. "Huff, huff, huff." He breathed heavily. That same strange mark on his hand. "Huh, why does this mark appear everytime I have a nightmare?" He asked. His name was Link. He walked out of his cabin pondering these strange questions. Who is Ganon. What is that voice. Why is this mark appearing on his hand.
"Maybe I should see the mayor." Link said. Link was about 4'2" and he always wore tunics, preferably green. He has sea blue eyes, bushy, blonde hair, and wore a green hat with his tunic.
As he rushed through the cold December night, the dew on the ground making his feet damp. Picture of that man kept rushing into his mind. No, not pictures, visions. A boy that resembled him greatly stabbing him in the head, the man being turned to stone. And many more visions like it.
He was 6'4", had red hair, and dark skin. His name was Ganondorf. Suddenly, Link dropped to the ground clutching his head. The visions made his head hurt. Like memories from past selves.
He entered the mayor's office, just before it was time to lock-up No one was there. And there was a strange laughter. "HAH HAH HAH HAH! HAAH HAHAHA HA!" Suddenly, everything started to spin, and Ganondorf's face appeared.
Suddenly, the boy awoke with sweat on his face. And he was screaming. | |
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| Subject: Re: TLoZ: Flames of Fury Mon Dec 28, 2009 10:31 am | |
| ...Needs work and is way to short, my friend. Not enough details, and it seems rushed. Try harder on the next chapter ^^ | |
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Link368 Hylian Knight
Posts : 700 Rupees : 24306 Reputation : -16 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 26 Location : Scott, Louisiana, U.S.
| Subject: Re: TLoZ: Flames of Fury Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:07 pm | |
| :/ OK, it's a little bad because a made it at 3:00 AM. The other few chapters are mainly intro's, but in chapter 3, - Spoiler:
Link and Dark Link battle.
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